If you can draw pretty decent, you should make this a webcomic or something, it's pretty good. I like it.
THERE IS NO BLURB.
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I can draw hardly at all. So there is absolutely no possibility of me doing that.
BUT SOMEONE ELSE IS WELCOME TO DO SO!
If you quote me of course... and link here.
So...the government is experimenting/researching with brainwashing.
I like the way you think.
Not brain-WASHING, brain-READING! The study is not on how to manipulate someone's mind, but rather to plot it out! To gather all held information, determine their every move, and thusly control them!
I don't think actual mind control is plausible at all outside of the realm of hypnotism, which has already been written to death. Mental analysis is much closer though. This may even be happening in real life.
So keep on reading the series! I've already started writing the third chapter.
THAT IS SO AWESOME!
The series has got me so excited.
Enough praise! I must now compose the third chapter in handwriting... and let it be on Newgrounds soon!
I'll make sure to link you in my sig XD
Do so. Have it say...
CLICK HERE to read Hallways, Viewtiful-Chris's sci-fi epic!
O>O wow u got story skills
dude this is kickass. you better get it published when its done.visit me
I dunno... I'm not sure about publishing it.
Getting into the world of copyright laws and business is a dangerous thing for a thirteen-year old.
interesting, well thought out and well written. I like it.
The suspense! It makes my penis hard. Now show me that pussy for some hard lovin'.
hmmmm.... less gay than Freezepop's Jem... and actually interesting. lemme read further to give you suggestions.
still bad maybe a little better
The only good thing that has ever come out of you was that video of you lipsinking jem That was awesome
Unlike this story
The idea is pretty good, but you honestly write like a retard.
I'm enjoying this a good bit, but every time someone finishes talking you need to state who said what. Other than that your writing is improving...
I've heard that's confusing, but I wanted to leave them unknown so I could just simply explain them with the "recently assigned to assist the other man" phrase.
lol
this story still suck ass
Now this really improved! Though the first paragraph was still kinda gay,with all the repeating words and sentences,but later on it kept going better.
Hebacheba
Brilliantly written yet again. Make these chapters faster or face my wrath.
Viewtiful-Chris
I'm glad they rock. BUT I NEED MORE COMMENTORS!!! These are live, all-approved comments people! Don't just view, interact! Thanks Hebacheba, but I need to be fed a little more to stimulate my creative energies. I don't write well just to one person.