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Hallways: Chapter Three

Posted by Viewtiful-Chris - November 17th, 2007


HALLWAYS CONTINUES!!! After all the praise I've gotten from Chapters One and Two, you can be damned sure this is going to stay awesome! The storyline is all planned out in my head, but I'm writing it on paper to ensure perfection.

This chapter is so far dedicated to Hebacheba and InnerChild548, my Number One fans. Check them out.

Any advertisement is GLADLY appreciated! Signature links would be great! Be sure to keep reading and commenting, I have lots of time to respond to it all! PM's also accepted!

OF COURSE, DO NOT COPY THIS STORY ANYWHERE. PLAGIARISM SUCKS.

IMPORTANT: FOR ALL NEW READERS, DO NOT READ THIS CHAPTER YET. Click the button on the bottom that reads 'All News Posts' and read them sequencially. This is a continuous storyline.

Here it is...

Chapter Three

Andrew Werdna woke up. He got out of his bed, opened his bedroom door, walked into the hallway, closed his bedroom door, walked down the hallway, and stopped.

He was in a room with no doors, no passageways. This was the first dead-end ever in the maze. Where he was going to go, supposed to go, was a solid white wall.

He stood fixated on the wall, emotionless. Footsteps he couldn't hear approached him. A hand was laid on his shoulder.

This touch, this contact, this other living form surged through Andrew. He broke out of the labyrinth and flew around his life. Feelings came back to him, memories, experiences, pain, love, and hearing. That touch, the interruption of everything that was part of the never-ending enclosure cycle, the white hallways leading to where he always was, up woke Andrew Werdna.

What also came was the terror of the past transition into infinity. How he had been selected out of a computer system for his average mental and physical capabilities, his lack of family connections, and his anonymity, particularly due to his palindromic name. How they took him and performed extensive physical testing on him, then halted his body growth through injections and hacked off his genitalia. Then they dropped him into the maze, and there he was ever since.

Displaying a look of shock mixed with fear, he turned to face the man. He was about one foot taller than him, and smiled down on Andrew. Unlike Andrew, who now realized he was naked, the man was sharply dressed. He wore a white vest, pale slacks, and shiny black shoes. His dark brown hair was radiant and matted down handsomely. Andrew was bald. The man's green eyes looked deep into his own blue ones.

After a time for Andrew to regain organization of thought, the man spoke down to Andrew like an angel,

"I've come to release you, Andrew Werdna."

Andrew felt like he had heard this voice very many times before, as though it were in his dreams each night. The man held out his hand and Andrew grasped it tightly, as though he might disappear otherwise. The man lead him back towards the door, and showed him a path he hadn't seen. Andrew could see everything now. But the man was guiding him through every correct door.

Andrew and the project leader walked down the hallways together.

To be continued...


Comments

Wow. I don't know what to say other than that. Wow.

Thanks. I don't know what to say other than that. Thanks.

:D

just as freakin sick as the others. visit me

I deleted all your other comments here to save space. MMMKAY???

I really do like your story, even though I sent ya a pm 'nd stuff but anywho. I changed my sig, if you dun like it stfu >:C I'm doin' ya a favour here :D

I like your sig! Thanks for the favor! WAIT... are you British? FavOUR???

I FAPPED OVER THAT

I was going to delete that, but what's wrong with proclaiming your sexual magnetism to my writings?

o.O
After all that they released him! They screwed up his life and then just put him back!
Wow, your stories are interesting.

It isn't over yet...

YOU DO KNOW HE'S DOING THAT JUST TO REGAIN ANDREW'S CONSCIOUSNESS.

Don't you? Or did I just spill vital information?

Oops... (I could always edit!)

This is officially my favorite new story on here.

The praise keeps coming!

ummm...cool?

Really great!

Now for something completely different:

BRING ABANDONWARE TO THE PEOPLE!

That would be lovely!!!

INTERPLAY FTW BABY!!!

All those awesome games... wouldn't it be great???

look who is moving up in the world. try PM advertising again but to some random people. post on the front page a lot too.

Ah... if only I COULD post on the front page. Wouldn't that be fantastic!

Wait... you mean that lame Leave a Message secret? FORGET THAT!

Wow this is a reallygood story..and you're only 13. O_o

Yeah... only 13. Kinda sad how my life is so pathetic that I twist my sorrow into overflowing puddles of creativity. Wait... that's not sad!

I LOVE YOU NEWGROUNDS ADMIRERS!

no, honestly i have no idea what i mean. all the secrets i have unlocked suck. PM to random people and eat Reese's.

Okay. STOP FREAKING COMMENTING HERE!

No touchy! Do not respond! Wait for Chapter Four, which SHOULD arrive tonight.

Prob'ly not though, almost done writing it.

Wow, pretty interesting, pretty odd, and pretty breaking human rights. I likeses it!

All the elements of a good story in my opinion.

Joy to the world and all that, but OH FUCK THIS I'M GOING TO GO WATCH SOME HENTAI

WOW what the fuck was that who puts a to be continued in there post if u do that do it on the forum

You write like a bitch, and bitches be trippin all over each one of mah n***a's dreams

AND IT TURNS ME ON

stop reading this faggot ass stuff and read a real story like, Epic by Conor Costick or Costik
im not sure
but anyway, its a good book

Have you ever even read a fucking book? You might want to if you're going to keep on writing. I don't know why everyone is raving about this shit. I guess they don't read either. I do, however, and this is steamy, stinky shit. Have you ever read The Stand? Probably not. That is a good story, and Stephen King writes like a god. This is plain gay.

HMMM...

I don't know. What's a BOOK?

Amazing... you are a good sci-fi writer, but then again I'm starting to think that this fiction is different... I say these are dreams you're having, but with your own touch added on to them.